Today's Reading

Australian Mystery Writers' Festival, 50th Anniversary Program

The AMWF extends a very special welcome to our guest of honor: Henry McTavish, globally bestselling author of the Detective Morbund series. "Unputdownable and unbeatable: McTavish is peerless." New York Times

Ernest Cunningham: Ernest Cunningham's memoir Everyone in My Family Has Killed Someone took us deep into the story of one of Australia's most notorious serial killers, the Black Tongue. He is currently working on a novel.

Lisa Fulton: Lisa Fulton's bestselling debut novel The Balance of Justice shook the foundations of crime fiction on release twenty-one years ago with its white-hot rage and brutal truth, and was long-listed for the Justice in Fiction Award, Women's Prize, 2003. She is currently working on her long- awaited second novel.

S. F. Majors: S. F. Majors's gripping thrillers have captivated the world with their psychological complexity and hair-raising twists and turns. Her books include the New York Times bestselling Twists and Turns, which has been optioned for film by Netflix. Her young adult thriller My Lab Partner Is a Serial Killer is being adapted into a Broadway musical. She grew up rereading the only three books in her tiny town's school library, and now lives in the Blue Mountains with her partner and two dogs.

Alan Royce: Alan Royce is the author of the Dr. Jane Black series, comprising eleven novels and three novellas. A former forensic pathologist before being catapulted to crime-writing stardom, he brings his expertise in morgues and autopsies to the page. "Gritty, real and uncompromising. One to watch." Time, 2011
 
Wolfgang: Winner, Commonwealth Book Prize 2012; short-listed, Bookseller's Favorites Award 2012; short-listed, Goodreads Readers' Choice, Literary Fiction, 2012; short-listed, Best of Amazon 2012; short- listed, Justice in Fiction Award, Women's Prize (special exemption granted), 2003; long-listed, Miles Franklin Award 2015; long-listed, Independent Library Choice Awards 2015; Archibald Packing Room Prize subject 2018; Honorary Mention: International Poetry Prize, Oceanic Region, 2020. His next project is an interactive art project titled The Death of Literature.


PROLOGUE

From: [email protected]
To: <REDACTED>@penguinrandomhouse.com.au
Subject: Prologue

Hi <REDACTED>,

It's a hard no on the prologue, I'm afraid. I know it's the done thing in crime novels, to hook the reader in and all that, but it just feels a bit cheap here.

I know how to do it, of course, the scene you want me to write. An omniscient eye would survey the cabin's destruction, lingering on signs of a struggle: the strewn sheets, the upturned mattress, the bloodied handprint on the bathroom door. Add in fleeting glimpses of clues—three words hastily scrawled in blue ink on a manuscript, at odds with the crimson, dripping tip of the murder weapon—just enough to tantalize but nondescript enough not to spoil.

The final image would be of the body. Faceless, of course. You've got to keep the victim from the reader at the start. Maybe a sprinkle of some little detail, a personal item like a piece of clothing (the blue scarf, or something, I'm not sure) that the reader can watch for in the buildup.

That's it: the book, the blood, the body. Carrots dangled. End of prologue.

It's not like I don't trust your editorial judgment. It just seems overly pointless to me to replay a scene from later in the book merely for the purpose of suspense. It's like saying, "'Hey, we know this book takes a while to get going, but it'll get there'." Then the poor reader is just playing catch-up until we get to the murder.

Well, that scene is the second murder anyway, but you get my point. I'm just wary of giving away too much. So, no prologue. Sound okay? Best,

Ernest

P.S. After what's happened, I think it's fairly obvious I'll need a new literary agent. I'll be in touch about that separately.

P.P.S. Yes, we do have to include the festival program. I think there are important clues in it.
 
P.P.P.S. Grammar question—I've thought it funny that Murder on the Orient Express is titled as such, given that the murders take place in the train and not on it. Death on the Nile has it a bit more correct, I think, given the lack of drownings. Then again, of course you say you're on a train or a plane. I'm laboring the point, but I guess my question is whether we use on or in for our title? Given, of course, most of the murders take place in the train, except of course what happens on the roof, which would be on. Except for the old fella's partner and those who died alongside him, but that's a flashback. Am I making sense?
...

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Today's Reading

Australian Mystery Writers' Festival, 50th Anniversary Program

The AMWF extends a very special welcome to our guest of honor: Henry McTavish, globally bestselling author of the Detective Morbund series. "Unputdownable and unbeatable: McTavish is peerless." New York Times

Ernest Cunningham: Ernest Cunningham's memoir Everyone in My Family Has Killed Someone took us deep into the story of one of Australia's most notorious serial killers, the Black Tongue. He is currently working on a novel.

Lisa Fulton: Lisa Fulton's bestselling debut novel The Balance of Justice shook the foundations of crime fiction on release twenty-one years ago with its white-hot rage and brutal truth, and was long-listed for the Justice in Fiction Award, Women's Prize, 2003. She is currently working on her long- awaited second novel.

S. F. Majors: S. F. Majors's gripping thrillers have captivated the world with their psychological complexity and hair-raising twists and turns. Her books include the New York Times bestselling Twists and Turns, which has been optioned for film by Netflix. Her young adult thriller My Lab Partner Is a Serial Killer is being adapted into a Broadway musical. She grew up rereading the only three books in her tiny town's school library, and now lives in the Blue Mountains with her partner and two dogs.

Alan Royce: Alan Royce is the author of the Dr. Jane Black series, comprising eleven novels and three novellas. A former forensic pathologist before being catapulted to crime-writing stardom, he brings his expertise in morgues and autopsies to the page. "Gritty, real and uncompromising. One to watch." Time, 2011
 
Wolfgang: Winner, Commonwealth Book Prize 2012; short-listed, Bookseller's Favorites Award 2012; short-listed, Goodreads Readers' Choice, Literary Fiction, 2012; short-listed, Best of Amazon 2012; short- listed, Justice in Fiction Award, Women's Prize (special exemption granted), 2003; long-listed, Miles Franklin Award 2015; long-listed, Independent Library Choice Awards 2015; Archibald Packing Room Prize subject 2018; Honorary Mention: International Poetry Prize, Oceanic Region, 2020. His next project is an interactive art project titled The Death of Literature.


PROLOGUE

From: [email protected]
To: <REDACTED>@penguinrandomhouse.com.au
Subject: Prologue

Hi <REDACTED>,

It's a hard no on the prologue, I'm afraid. I know it's the done thing in crime novels, to hook the reader in and all that, but it just feels a bit cheap here.

I know how to do it, of course, the scene you want me to write. An omniscient eye would survey the cabin's destruction, lingering on signs of a struggle: the strewn sheets, the upturned mattress, the bloodied handprint on the bathroom door. Add in fleeting glimpses of clues—three words hastily scrawled in blue ink on a manuscript, at odds with the crimson, dripping tip of the murder weapon—just enough to tantalize but nondescript enough not to spoil.

The final image would be of the body. Faceless, of course. You've got to keep the victim from the reader at the start. Maybe a sprinkle of some little detail, a personal item like a piece of clothing (the blue scarf, or something, I'm not sure) that the reader can watch for in the buildup.

That's it: the book, the blood, the body. Carrots dangled. End of prologue.

It's not like I don't trust your editorial judgment. It just seems overly pointless to me to replay a scene from later in the book merely for the purpose of suspense. It's like saying, "'Hey, we know this book takes a while to get going, but it'll get there'." Then the poor reader is just playing catch-up until we get to the murder.

Well, that scene is the second murder anyway, but you get my point. I'm just wary of giving away too much. So, no prologue. Sound okay? Best,

Ernest

P.S. After what's happened, I think it's fairly obvious I'll need a new literary agent. I'll be in touch about that separately.

P.P.S. Yes, we do have to include the festival program. I think there are important clues in it.
 
P.P.P.S. Grammar question—I've thought it funny that Murder on the Orient Express is titled as such, given that the murders take place in the train and not on it. Death on the Nile has it a bit more correct, I think, given the lack of drownings. Then again, of course you say you're on a train or a plane. I'm laboring the point, but I guess my question is whether we use on or in for our title? Given, of course, most of the murders take place in the train, except of course what happens on the roof, which would be on. Except for the old fella's partner and those who died alongside him, but that's a flashback. Am I making sense?
...

Join the Library's Online Book Clubs and start receiving chapters from popular books in your daily email. Every day, Monday through Friday, we'll send you a portion of a book that takes only five minutes to read. Each Monday we begin a new book and by Friday you will have the chance to read 2 or 3 chapters, enough to know if it's a book you want to finish. You can read a wide variety of books including fiction, nonfiction, romance, business, teen and mystery books. Just give us your email address and five minutes a day, and we'll give you an exciting world of reading.

What our readers think...